17:29:20	 From Ezra Barany's iPad : Howdy! we'll start soon!
17:29:51	 From Ezra Barany's iPad : We have to scratch our ears first.
17:30:15	 From Ezra Barany's iPad : Leo is teaching us how.
17:31:19	 From Carol : No echo
17:34:22	 From Beth Barany : Hi Nicole!
17:34:52	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : Hi.
17:36:35	 From Carol : Hi Nicole.
17:36:43	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : HI.
17:38:21	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : Give me the number.
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18:03:07	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : You could do a combo method in one scene.
18:10:55	 From Carol : Not my detectives.
18:11:03	 From Carol : Love Lady at the Lake.
18:11:17	 From Carol : He's telling the whole story - really telling.
18:15:09	 From Carol : Meanwhile, back at the ranch...
18:15:09	 From gaylordphoto : sex scenes are most erotic, breath by breath
18:16:38	 From gaylordphoto : to much detail is my normal when I'm enjoying the story
18:18:02	 From Carol : I'd hope by now after going through most of your School of Fiction, I'd be at the 4 and 5 level. 
18:20:34	 From Carol : But I'm realizing it should be a combo-pack
18:21:19	 From gaylordphoto : same in photography, show minimum
18:21:43	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : How do I show a nonverbal character?
18:22:47	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : He was raised in a dungeon, so he doesn't have language.
18:23:54	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : The story is multi-perspective, so his Pov is used.
18:25:02	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : His diary is part of the serial.
18:25:19	 From gaylordphoto : research shows lanuage is formed early, and no real understanding beyond certain age
18:25:27	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : He is given a diary.
18:25:48	 From gaylordphoto : don't remember what age
18:26:40	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : He It's his diary, but he is given the diary when he leaves his current volume. It's a blank audio diary.
18:26:47	 From Carol : I do like it that there are really levels of Showing and Telling. It's not something I thought could co-exist.
18:26:55	 From gaylordphoto : reminding me to change pace, 1-5
18:35:21	 From Ezra Barany's iPad : granular edits by others are best when you feel you've completed your final draft.
19:01:26	 From Nicole Thompson-Andrews : Next steps work on blog, newsletter and finish up Table of Contents and start Episode 1
19:01:30	 From gaylordphoto : Re-edit my chap one, with all the info from today
19:02:47	 From Carol : Editing, editing, editing. Ghost-writing for a friend starting tomorrow.